Friday, April 4, 2014

Brooke 10. Agency 6.


Doesn't anybody know how to speak English anymore?  Here's a national Foster Grant commercial featuring world-famous Brooke Shields. It's a very nice commercial. What would make it better is correct English. One does not have less scratches, one has fewer scratches. The same applies to smudges: fewer not less. Also eye strain is not hyphenated. It is used as two words or sometimes as one. Were you wearing your glasses Brooke when you read this sloppy script.

Note: When I type these posts, I can see the full width of the commercial, but when I review it, I see a less wide version, which I guess is what you see, too. Sorry. I also find it incredibly irritating that banner commercials are attached to my posts.

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