Friday, February 22, 2013

Talk about embarrassing spots.

Commercials are 30 seconds. It seems to me if you're any kind of a writer, you could make half-a-minute of copy understandable. That doesn't seem to be the case here. When her sister says, "You didn't have to come over." what is she talking about? Come over for what? To acknowledge the spots on my glasses? To greet the bizarre counselor? This commercial, like her glass, is very unclear.

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